Monday, 18 March 2013

Sleeping In A Tent

While sleeping in a tent with two other boys right beside me was so uncomfortable because there was not much space. Also the ground was lumpy and uneven. It was absolutely crammed.

2 comments:

  1. I can see you have added detail to your first sentence Stevenson, well done. I am also happy to see you have used the words we came up with.

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    1. Hi Mr.Marks

      Thanks for commenting on my blog.

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