This blog is a record of my learning during the years I was at Pt England School.
Monday, 18 March 2013
Sleeping In A Tent
While sleeping in a tent with two other boys right beside me was so uncomfortable because there was not much space. Also the ground was lumpy and uneven. It was absolutely crammed.
I can see you have added detail to your first sentence Stevenson, well done. I am also happy to see you have used the words we came up with.
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